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Writer's pictureMason Marshall

More Updates!

after seeing the animatics and deliberating on what works, we have come up with another updated pass at the story beats:


Here are story beats for scenes 01 and 02:Scene 01: Intro Sequence

  • Close-up of skull on counter (food on stove in background). Skull picked up, spray clean counter

  • Spooky candelabra, goblet, pizza/Arby’s boxes on table. Cleared off

  • Blood juice box, other garbage on floor. Picked up, bugs scurry

  • Creepy, rusty gardening tools, gathered up

  • Mirror with face in it, windexed, face disappears

  • Framed zombie death certificate, photos of friends, dusted/cobwebs cleaned

  • Dust/bones/trash swept into pile in closet, tilt/crane up to shoulder slamming bulging door closed

These shots intermixed with Mark in bathroom getting ready:

  • brushing teeth

  • Perfume/cologne

  • Putting on clothes, final seconds

Cut to Mark walking toward window to open blinds:

  • interior, approaching blinds

  • Exterior open blinds, reveal Mark face and monsters on couch

  • monsters react

  • Mark talks to monsters about not screwing anything up

  • Monsters “omg, we knooow, we won’t

 do anything”

  • Mark leaves

  • Mark pops back in?

Scene 02: After Mark leaves

  • monsters mock Mark

  • Bat monster, wearing robe, acts like GF

  • Bat monster trips on robe belt, falls into dinner table

Destruction (see Corndog’s sequence)

  • Dinner table breaks in half, everything goes flying

  • Pieces fly into closet door, door bursts open

  • Monster crap from closet flies across kitchen, hits stove controls

  • Pots bubble up and explode

  • Flaming crap goes everywhere

  • Couch incinerates, except for the part the zombie sits on

  • monsters

 hiding behind pieces of the table as shit explodes around them

  • Monsters; “oh shit”

  • Pano of destroyed apartment

Thought bubble sequence

  • SO leaves Mark

  • Mark sad, cries an ocean

  • Mark eaten by a big shark

  • Interrupted by zombie hand slapping Aldo and Bat

(edited)

Monday, April 27th

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